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In today's job market it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge .In the future, job applicants may not need any formal qualifications. to what extent you agree or disagree?

#job #market #skills #future #applicants #qualifications
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It is argued that in modern job market
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 skills are more important than just bookish knowledge.
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, prospective
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employees
 may not require to attain any educational qualifications and training. I totally disagree with
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 view and I believe it is essential because achieving a degree provides the historical significance and importance of that subject and enable us to do more research in the long run.
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 with, the main reason why
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 consider it is crucial is that every subject has some historical background. By
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 mean, for certain
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employments
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 as Business and accounting, health care industry,agricultural and so on, job aspirants may have some previous knowledge in terms of qualification which helps them to understand that area of employment.
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, with the advancements of technology in every field of life , the trend to take specific courses and training in that particular sub-speciality is getting more
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popular
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 people are more
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interested
 to upgrade themselves in areas where they are lacking
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 knowledge and in
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 way they
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familiarize
 themselves with the history of that subject.
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 reason I think it is vital is that emergence of new research is based on previously researched work. When a person acquires
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articular qualification and
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integrate
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ractical experience he or she is able to innovate new ideas and that will help them in future.
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, without achieving a certain qualification people can not excel in the current employment market and people can have excellent
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practical
 experience, but they would miss the opportunity to think beyond their potential for new ideas. As it can be concluded that, official academic qualifications and certifications play a key role in the present employment industry because people need to have the basic
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knowledge
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 them research more about that particular field.
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