The crime rate has increased rapidly around the world. Discuss some causes for this rise and suggest workable solutions to this problem.

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in modern society has been surprisingly on the rise as the day goes by.

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ver-growing population, regulation

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become hard to control and

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situation causes by growing the number of crimes. Experts claim that the ever-growing

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is caused the gap of

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ndividual’s wealth and severe stress.

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essay will elaborate on the problems of rising crimes, including solutions. nts.

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, they have to commit

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. Others who have economic abilities,

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, suffer from various kinds of stress on their workplace and schools.

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they have to compete with other peers and always make a beneficial economic value. For students, they usually are pushed

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tudy hard from their parents and teachers. have to address quickly as soon as possible for individual

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and protections.

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, they should provide job opportunities for poor people, which can easily overcome their circumstance and find out their own ability. And the other solution is that

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governments and public schools should make a program, which some culprit students can realize

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why they must not have to commit

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rime.

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should give a chance to change their life like assimilating with other friends as well. To sum up,

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rime rate,

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has been considerably increased at once, can control to lose percentage when the governments and individual efforts.

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, if the governments make

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appropriate economic value and initiative for losing stressful, those problems can address as soon.