Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on the society.

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There is no doubt that the number of
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majors is decreasing
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respect to other majors.
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to its consequences. One of the most significant reasons
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the problem of lacking students who are specialising in
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roper way in high school.
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, when the time came for university they choose any subjects to be specialized in except
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,
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is one of the most difficult and effort-consuming subjects, As a consequence of
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, there are many students avoid being
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specialists. Turning to the consequences of lacking
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specialists in society.
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issue has many detrimental effects,
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the most significant effect is that,it
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to less new inventions in the country, and
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is essential to the prosperity of the country. Another point is that
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of students
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a bad influence on
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ountry's economy because
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overnment will have to import scientists from other countries to recover lacking in these majors. In conclusion,
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subject is tough and demanding subject and need a lot of effort to be scientist and specialist,
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the whole world in need to
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kind of majors in order to develop and improve scientifically and economically.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • deter
  • promotion
  • opportunities
  • role models
  • lucrative
  • employment
  • gender stereotypes
  • societal norms
  • access to information
  • technological stagnation
  • shortage
  • skilled professionals
  • innovation
  • healthcare sector
  • workforce
  • global competitiveness
  • advancements
  • economic growth
  • public health services
  • environmental sciences
  • combat climate change
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