Not enough students around the world choose to study science subjects at university. What are the reasons for this? What impact does this issue have on society?

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evelopment of our society, but facing the
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shortage in university now. In my opinion, the phenomenon of insufficient scientific students may
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reconception of human beings. One of
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cience-related occupation that most people, affected by the previous thought that people who worked in a
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level.The majority of college applicants perceive
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as a route to earn mediocre
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, many students who have interest in
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may adopt remuneration as
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criteria rather than their aptitude on
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when they choose major.
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, imbalanced of the number of students in different major will cause uneven distribution of
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ob market. The number of social-
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graduates overweight and unemployed, but
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to find skilled
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students spreads wider. In conservative cognition of male and female in the workplace , males always are recognized as
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etter choice at the technological realm, for scientists, and women are less capable
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-related subjects[改成position].
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social and economic development, majority of
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had been abandoned , and male and female are equally capable in
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, people’s mind still not emancipated totally, which means the majority of female still tend to choose to major in non-scientific subjects. So
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ollege will lose a considerable number of female applicants , and the
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companies and workplace will be continuously dominated by male. Lack of gender diversity may impede
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evelopment of
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cience industry . In conclusion, today the
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of being a technician has increased a lot though, applicants for
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-related major are still in a
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,due to the fact that the stereotype of
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in
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apability of
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ifferent gender. If
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cannot be adjusted, the society will be imbalanced.
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our society may be stagnant as one of the most significant factor technology being ignored by most females. lose of new ideas and energy.
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