In many countries women no longer feel the need to get married. Some people believe that this is because women are able to earn their own income can therefore do not require the financial security that marriage can bring. To what extent do you agree?

in the earlier times, the

marriage

was substituted for financial security primarily for women by family and society.

This

mentality is believed by some people to be changed as more women now started achieving financial security by focusing more on

career

than on getting married. I completely agree with

this

notion as the new era women have become independent and focused on achieving her dreams. The modern family of many developing countries are more focused on the higher

education

and

career

of their child regardless of the gender and at the same time

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women have started becoming more independent.

To begin

with, the modern family now consider

education

more important than

marriage

for their daughter. To prove my point, the 21st-century family is determined to make their daughter a pilot,

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engineer, or successful women based on her capability and restrain her from being dependent on anyone for anything.

This

immense support has resulted in women not getting married at a very young age. Because most of her young age she is busy in her

education

to build her a

career

of her choice.

Secondly

, unlike the past, modern women

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more determined than ever to pursue her own dreams and prefer not

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be dependent on anyone for anything.

For instance

, the recent news of economic survey conducted by Economic Forum in October states that 62% of the employment in

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igher position in the world's most reputed jobs is occupied by women.

Furthermore

, as women nowadays do not consider

marriage

for the sake of financial dependency,

therefore

, they

also

choose their own husband which she can become her companion. To conclude, it is clear that the modern family and their daughters are more determined towards higher

education

and

career

than emphasizing more on

marriage

.

This

new trend has become very common in most of the countries,

however

, there are some conservative parts of the world where women are still begin considered inferior. In those parts, the government must promote women by introducing women-centric policies.