Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People have their individual way to tackle their situations. Many people believe that it is good to accept the situation
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nsatisfactory job or lack of money. While
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believe that we should make constant efforts to make a
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transition in our
life
.
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essay will discuss both views and share my opinion. On the one hand, there are people who are not happy with their workplace or
relationship
or money they make. While they are unsatisfied with their scenario,they don't want to make a shift in their
life
. To explain, from a survey conducted by
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private organisation 43% people are happy with their wages and the ambient of their workplace still they are afraid to change their job due to the fear that may be they have to stay at home for few weeks and pay their bills from their savings.
Moreover
, data from same research
also
reflect that 52% people are not happy in the
relationship
they are in but still they continue to stay in the
relationship
due to fear to loneliness which leads to worse situations and depression
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.All in all, people who don't have
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ourage to make a positive shift in their
life
live a very low energetic and unhappy
life
.
On the other hand
,there are
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lethora of people who make constant efforts and lead a happy and successful
life
.
This
can be done in multifarious ways.
Firstly
, the person who is not satisfied in his / her should try to acquire more skill and study harder to qualify for superior jobs in
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arket.
Secondly
, people should immediately break up from the
relationship
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both the people.
Finally
, people should take every challenge positively and try for every possible way out.
Finally
, with determination, hardship and
preservance
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preserve
preserving
people can achieve higher goals in
life
for the ultimate happiness for them and their family members. In Conclusion, there are some situations where people have to accept like
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eath of dear one.Other I
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believe
belive
that human beings should make constant efforts to achieve higher goals.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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