Some people are of the opinion that children should be rewarded for good behaviour. Others think they should be punished for bad behaviour. Discuss both views and give your personal opinion and reasons.

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’s moral education is difficult

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the various

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each party holds. The question of discipline is exceptionally important,

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whether to treat good

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with a neutral attitude or to just focus on correcting incorrect

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. My personal opinion is that any positive

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ought to be immediately recognised by the parent and vice versa for negative conduct.

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balanced approach makes for a more positive outcome for both the

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and

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rewarding a good act immediately signals a positive reaction in the

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’s brain which should encourage the

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to want to behave

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. Failure to recognise

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behaviour

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leaves the

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with the same emotional feeling as if they had done nothing.

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rewarding the

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regularly for good

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enforces the action making it more likely to repeat itself in the

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.

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punishing the son or daughter is

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necessary, failure to discipline could have serious consequences in the

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if a

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has no clear concept of respect for elders or authority it is quite possible to encounter more serious problems later in life.

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pattern is prevalent in marginal neighbourhoods throughout the world.

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it is essential to immediately discipline the

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whenever witnessing an unruly act so as to enforce the correct

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from an early age.

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both bad and good

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need to be recognised and dealt with immediately to correct or encourage

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. Failure to do either of these could result in a less fortunate life or a youth who rarely performs any good acts for anyone.

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it is critical that both types of

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are recognised and dealt with

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for the benefit of the

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in the

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