Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is said that too much
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is devoted to teaching factual concepts in all educational levels, while the amount of
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allocated to practical skills is not sufficient. I am firmly convinced that
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practice should not be applied. That all educational facilities pay too much attention to theoretical concepts rather than practical ones is undeniable. The curricula of various educational levels have been designed in
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way to incorporate more theoretical knowledge so as to improve student's academic achievement. Students studying in a secondary school,
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, have many theoretical lectures on Chemistry, including elements of the periodic table and specific chemical formulas, whereas
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course includes only two or three laboratory sessions based on the planned subject syllabus.
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, the reason why inadequate
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is allocated to practical courses could be their high costs. Providing practical facilities
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as cutting-edge labs and hands-on workshops are not affordable for many universities due to the high cost of their equipment like computers, or centrifuges. Whit they not paying enough money for providing these facilities, it would make students' lessons more teacher-led and make students less autonomous learner inasmuch as most of their lessons would be theoretical. Being a passive learner would not lead to acquiring critical thinking skills, including interpretation, observation, and
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, all of which are significant for students' future path. The best policy could be equality between these skills. Allocating equal
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to Learning basic lessons, and putting them into practice, the students will enable
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o work more efficiently in their workplaces. If a medical student spends an amount of
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learning some facts regarding a variety of injuries on
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uman body, and
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spend the same
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participating in workshops, replete with medical moulage that
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the damage done to
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uman body like wounds, they will learn better how to manage different types of injuries, leading to being more decisive in case of urgent medical attention. To conclude, I believe that all students in each level suffer from lack of practical skills due to the high cost of educating these skills ,and
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on academic degrees, and both skills should be taught equally.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • rote memorization
  • practical skills
  • adaptable skills
  • critical thinking
  • balanced approach
  • problem-solving
  • decision-making
  • workforce readiness
  • real-life challenges
  • technological advancements
  • information management
  • creativity hindrance
  • lifelong learning
  • skill development
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