Imagine you are going to have a trip in a faraway village. There is no internet and phone signal. What do you do to have an interesting trip?

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am going to have a trip
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a faraway village and there is no internet and phone signal,
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will do some following things to have an interesting trip.
Firstly
, I will communicate with local people and participate in cultural activities when I ride to villages. By doing
this
, I can broaden my horizons about different cultures as well as the local people’s lifestyle and
therefore
become more open-minded.
Secondly
, I will explore the directions by myself without relying on Google Map anymore. If there have troubles, I will ask the locals for directions.
Moreover
, they can give me helpful tips on what to avoid and where the best eats and cheap shopping deals are. By not relying on the wonders of the internet for my way around
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illage, I can get to foster new friendships by striking up random conversations and exchange great travel stories from all walks of life.
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, I will bring offline entertainment
such
as a book or a notebook because maybe I need to read something or write down a short story before going to sleep.
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