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The amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. write a report on this with your own idea based on data.

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The following
ber
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 chart illustrates that the number of
leisure
 hour enjoyed by male and female in a typical
week
 by gender and various employment status in 1998-99.
Initially
, at a glance
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it has been shown that unemployed and retired had more
leisure
time
 than employed people and housewives. It can be seen that
,
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 full
time
 employed men had spent about 45 hours in
leisure
time
comapred
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compared
 to the full
time
 employed women, who had spent about 38 hours in a
week
. There is no data for
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part-time
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p
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art
time
 employed men but
part
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part-time
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time
 employed women had spent around 40 hours
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leisure
time
 in a
week
. It is a little higher than full
time
 employed women, perhaps it is for their employment nature.
On the other hand
, unemployed and retired people spent more
leisure
time
 than employed people. Unemployed and retired men had around 80 hours of
leisure
time
 in a
week
, whereas
unemlpoyed
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unemployed
employed
 and retired women had approximately 78 hours in a
week
 which is
slighty
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slightly
 lower than men. In
addtion
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addition
, housewives had around 45 hours of
leisure
time
 in a
week
, which
s lower
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slower
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 than unemployed and retired people but higher than employed people. To summerise the ber chart, it had been shown that, unemployed and retired men had much
leisure
time
 than women and any other
employement
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employment
 statuses.
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