Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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Include an introduction and conclusion
A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.
The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.
The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:
Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation
Example:
To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported.After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.
Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:
Some argue that the government is wasting money to discover life outside Earth and the money should be spent on solving problems in the society instead. I believe that as there are no significant discoveries despite the never-ending increase in budget, and there are more urgent matters in our communities, I totally agree the state should invest more in addressing social problems instead of discovering the unknown.
Nowadays, many people think that each and every student in school should learn a foreign language, starting from their earliest grades. If questioned to me, I would strongly agree with the statement above, a detailed elaboration of my preference is discussed in the following write-ups.
Many individuals think that reducing environmental pollution and also housing problems can be one of the most viable solutions in order to prevent illness and disease. In my opinion, although many diseases that are related to environmental issues can be prevented by reducing pollution, personally housing problems should be considered in a wider view. The aim of this essay is to discuss the argument and it will represent relevant examples.
Many nations have been faced with this problem that the increasing use of smartphones in children activity. I personally disagree with the view and its influence the negative effects of the children who play with smartphones and will explore more of the bad effects of this situation.
Climate change, loss of plant, rare and dying animals are chiefly problems of our time in the World. Some believe that in our time is the loss of variety plant and animals the main environmental problem while others opinion that there are most crucial environmental problems.