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The desire for higher status or great wealth than others is what motivate most people to succeed in the world. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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In
this
 modern
world
, everything is cheaper or you can everything you want in your
life
 if you are rich by your
status
 or by
wealth
. Some people think that higher class pupil motivates to the other so that they can start to do hard
work
 to achieve
h
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igher
status
 in society. I agree with
this
 statement. To begins with
,
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 when any normal
person
 become rich because of their hard
work
 and when he achieves
success
 in his
life
then
 he will become a special
person
 for others who will be going to follow him. The higher
status
 or great
wealth
 not only motivates to people but
also
 a big influence in their
life
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for instance
, Bills Gates was a normal
person
 before his
success
 but his invention of Microsoft, he changed the
world
 and now he is the
world
's 1st richest
person
 and
that is
 the thing which really big influence on other people. Every individual wants to
work
 with you if you have a
success
 or
wealth
 and motivates to another who still thinking about their carrier.
Furthermore
, the desire of higher
status
 or make a great
wealth
, not only teach you a lesson about
life
 but
also
 teach you about to do hard
work
 in one particular discipline manner
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for example
, everybody knows the real name behind the TESLA automotive company is Elon Musk and because of his hard
work
 and his discipline, he is coming top 10 Billionaires list in the
world
 and because of his name and fame he gave so many motivational interviews and speeches, that really inspire to the new generation. Some people inspire form books like motivational biography (on
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ndividual's personal
life
) that help to succeed in the
world
. In the end, there are so many examples in the
world
 like their struggling
life
 and another hurdle in their
life
 or another motivational speech but the individual will succeed only if he follows them in his regular basis
life
,
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 if he does so
then
 nobody stops you to achieve
success
.
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