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It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science subjects. What are causes? And what will be effected on society?

#countries #students #study #science #subjects #society
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Presently, many countries around the world do not have many students who choose to
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 science course. From my point of view, there are a lot of reasons and effects
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ublic. Every school has many subjects at present like Math, Science,etc.
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, the most that people did not choose are Science, so there are many reasons why people like to
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 other subjects because Science is very hard and divided at 3 sections are Physics,
Chemisty
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Chemistry
 and Biology, so there are not only have a lot of
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 many specific words, so learners can not remember all
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, some people think that it is so boring and it is not their types.
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, they believe that if they choose to
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, there are a lot of effects that the world will encounter because if school do not have any people learn Science course, countries will not have scientists, their countries will not develop.
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, Covin 19 spread around the world at present. If countries do not have any scientists, they will do not have
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vaccines
 to protect people' health and they can die, so
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 is the main effect if learner
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 not
study
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 about Science and they should
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 cause for dangerous situations will happen in the future. To sum up, more and more people look that children in many countries do not learn Science course.
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, there are many causes
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 and many effects that people will find on society.
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