A government’s role is only to provide defence capability and urban infrastructure (roads, water supplies, etc.). All other services (education, health, social security) should be provided by private groups or individuals in the community. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is argued by some people that it is the responsibility of the

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to support only the military force and the basic

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foundations. On the other side , it is said that people in the society or some private organisations should take

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of all other needs like the field of

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,

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and protective sectors. Even though

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the

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has a major role in formerly stated fields, I personally believe that all other sectors are

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important, and those areas cannot be left completely to the hands of private institutions. On one

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, the

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must provide those services which are essential to a

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as armed forces and

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infrastructures, which is certainly important for a

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to stand tall in the world. Basically , people feel secure mainly because of the efficient military work in the borders. To save those soldiers it is essential for the

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to splurge on buying fighter flights and

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jackets.

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, within the

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to prevent major accidents and to satisfy the basic needs of people, the governing bodies have to spend on constructions.

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, it saves many lives in the

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.

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, recently, when there was a clash between India and China, the Indian

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bought fighter jets for a huge sum of money, which evoked the fear among Chinese soldiers.

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,some services could be provided by private sectors or

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or both

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as studies,

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and security. To ensure the quality and literacy of its citizens, the

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should take the responsibility for

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compulsory

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and basic

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so that all citizens can have easy access to them.

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, in tertiary

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or part of

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, the private groups could get involved at some stage.

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overnment should run primary

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centres and hospitals in each

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to give importance to the lives of downtrodden people.

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, in urban areas

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private hospitals can take

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of the people as those people can afford.

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, roads can be laid by private people and it should be maintained by

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overnment as they get funds in the form of tax. Though

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there are many facilities provided by private institutions, the

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has to take

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and

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invest more

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all sectors. Both should work

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to uplift the status of the

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. In conclusion, there are some services

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as military and

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foundations which must be provided by governments. Other services,

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water facilities and

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, could be provided by both governments and private enterprises because some basic needed services are not acquired by people in the breadline. So, both the

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and private groups can share in the provisional services.