Countries such as China, India and Japan have unsustainable population growths. In fact many experts are of the opinion that the population ‘explosion’ which is now a very worrying concern, is the most serious threat to life on this planet. Give some suggestions to address this problem.

Overpopulation prevailing in many parts of the world, particularly in countries like India, Japan and China is posing a significant threat to natural habitats
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arth. To deal with
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overnment can bring forth certain measures to limit people from giving birth, and
also
educating people will reduce
this
issue on a large scale. To embark on, the impact of overpopulation in these developing countries can be brought into control
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certain rules by the
government
.
Firstly
, people restricting with two children or one can be provided with positive reinforcement in the form of cash.
Secondly
, the subsidies given to them can be increased as a reward
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their step to reduce the
population
.
Thirdly
, primary level education for children from
such
nuclear families should be encouraged for free of cost by the
government
.
For instance
, in India, the Chief
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of Andhra Pradesh state came up with the norm “ Two children per family", and families following that system are given 25kgs of rice every month.
Lastly
, oral contraceptives and condoms must be free in all medical shops. Another step is to educate people about the ill effects of overpopulation
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the environment. Awareness should be created among people about the repercussion of explosive birth rate and the measures to control it.
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to
this
, in
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igher secondary school curriculum, the adverse effects of increasing
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irth rate should be included.
Similarly
, people should be made aware that the lack of resources is mainly because of
population
explosion, and air, water, noise pollution is
also
due to
this
. These things should be advocated
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them continues through media and through some private organisations
such
as NGO. Bombarding them with
such
notions eventually will change the nature of people.
For instance
, in Tamilnadu, the
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channel telecasting about
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pollution control and family planning measures to their citizens to bring about a change, which seriously worked and 28 % of
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opulation comprises only two children per family. In conclusion,
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opulation is increasing at an alarming rate in many countries and it is a threat to the whole world.
This
can be sorted out by taking corrective action by the
government
in the form of cash and reinforcements, and
also
by educating people.
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