Write a letter to your friend about a job opportunity you came across that they might find interesting. In your letter, you should: give some details about the job mention how you came across the job opportunity explain why you feel the job would be suitable for your friend

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Dear Jack, I hope

this

letter finds you well. I am sorry to hear that you lost your job because of

this

pandemic. I am writing

this

letter regards to a job

opprtunity

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opportunity

I got to know from my

collegue

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colleague

and I believe, you are the right person for it. There is a

vaccancy

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vacancy

for

senior

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a senior

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network engineer

postion

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position

in my company. It is a full-time

postion

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position

Melbourne

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the Melbourne

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office with all

fringe

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the fringe

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benefits that our company provides. You need

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to be

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in contact with various service providers and troubleshoot their problems. Two days back, after my meeting with HR of the company, he informed me about the

vaccancy

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vacancy

and asked me

recommend

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to recommend

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eligible

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an eligible

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person if I know anyone. As the job deals with service provider issues, Cisco certified network engineers are only eligible for

this

postion

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position

positions

. I know you achieved level 3 Cisco certification and have tons of

exeprience

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experience

. I feel no one is a better choice

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for

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this

postion

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position

than you. If you are

intrested

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interested

this

postion

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position

, please forward your resume to my mail. Waiting for your prompt response.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

181 words

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Write a letter to your friend about a job opportunity you came across that they might find interesting. In your letter, you should: give some details about the job mention how you came across the job opportunity explain why you feel the job would be suitable for your friend

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

The use of social media, such as Facebook and Twitter, is replacing face-to-face contact in this century. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people think that the teenagers years are the happiest times pf most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Some people say that we should not encourage sport games among schools because they lead to competition rather than cooperation. To what extend do you agree or disagree with?