It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

It is very crucial for children to learn the distinction between right and wrong at

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early age because in future whether they become a successful human being or not depend upon

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childhood education.

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ifference between accurate and inaccurate behaviour, but not always. The following essay will inform that to

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extent I agree

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opinion. Manners are an important part of a person’s life because on the basis of

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ood attitude there will be a decision whether a person will be good or bad.

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eason why it is vital to

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the children how to distinguish.

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if a person stole something ,

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ossibility of becoming a thief.

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, if parents give a lesson to their children that to earn something they should do hard work

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will transform them into a successful human.

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eason why chastisement is beneficial to help them transform into

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appropriate human being.

On the other hand

, a child should not be punished always. To illustrate, at

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irst time if a child does something

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it is the responsibility of parents or teachers to explain why

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incorrect and why should he or she not repeat

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mistake and if

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mistake is repeated several times,

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at that moment they he or she must be given

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rough treatment. To conclude,

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hild should be given a penalty but before that

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esponsibility of elders to explain

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them how to behave appropriately.