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Some people think the best way to stay fit is joining a gym/heath club while others think doing everyday activities such as walking and climbing stairs is sufficient. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Maintaining a healthy lifestyle can be achieved by
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ommitment to an exercise facility,
although
 some persons are of a different view and believe that everyday actions
such
 as walking and climbing are okay. I am of the opinion that life-style modification requires
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 authority of a health coach to achieve long term plan.
However
, both views would be expatiated on.
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aily routine may amount to some level of health safety, still,individuals may not be able to achieve the benefits derived from
this
 life-style over a long duration without any pressure or superior authority owing to loss of self-control and boredom . Clearly, humans have been known to lose interest in carrying out the same duty repeatedly.
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, a lady friend who usually parked her car about 1-meter distance from her office with the aim of jogging back at the close of work
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 got exhausted barely a month into her plan.
In contrast
, people who commit to an exercise facility are able to sustain a lifetime goal
as a result
 of the governing factor conferred by an instructor and the effect of peer pressure . An authority in place helps regulate diet and work-out session without any room for excuses, as every member is held accountable To
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 fact, I have been registered in a gym for one year with no intention of quitting soon,
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 of the communal support and overall monitoring. In conclusion, well being can be achieved via both regular actions
such
 as walking and going on a fitness journey. In my view, objectives are met when there is a sovereign power overseeing these actions.
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