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Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations. Skills such as cookery, dressmaking and woodwork should not be taught at school as it is better to learn these from family and friends. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#schools #focus #success #examinations #skills #cookery #woodwork #school #friends
Nowadays, most of
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chool believe they should improve their students in academic knowledge and passing formal examinations without developing
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skills
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tudent can learn these from family and friends. In my opinion, I disagree with the point of view.
Firstly
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school
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tudent in
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ducational program.
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, academic success
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 many
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, subject, skill to do
excercies
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exercises
exercise
 which only parents or friends could not teach
student
 totally. Because the amount of knowledge is termless, teachers in
school
 do not have enough time to teach daily
skills
such
 as cookery or woodwork and it depends on
invidual’s
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individual's
 talents to judge production. Students
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 have not enough handicraft to make
this
 would be boring when they have to study.
For example
, students can learn by heart to pass exams but they can not do
similarly
 with lessons of skill.
On the other hand
,
student
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 can not get high marks in academic subjects, maybe they want to develop in
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 range. Everyone has its own mission and talent in one’s life. In
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odern era, company or employer respect qualifications, so schools need to teach these
skills
 formally and recognize them by certificates. As an illustration,
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tudent can learn these
skills
 from family and friends but it is not complete. Parents can teach them by their experiences.
For example
, parents can teach daily dish but to cook a precious meal,
student
 need to learn about recipes, decorations,…or
student
 can sewing normal clothes and need to learn about
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rend of fashion, way to design,… In conclusion,
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chool should not respect academic success without caring about
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kills of
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tudent.
School
 should make a study environment to progress their
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erfect way.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • academic success
  • passing examinations
  • cookery
  • dressmaking
  • woodwork
  • learn from family and friends
  • personalized learning environment
  • supportive learning environment
  • well-rounded education
  • school curriculum
  • resources
  • expert guidance
  • enhance creativity
  • problem-solving
  • teamwork
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