You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: • explain why you are writing • express concern about the missing card • ask them what they intend to do

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing in connection with my

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card

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, I have received an envelope from your bank but the

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was missing.

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may prove me to be dangerous in the hands of the wrong person. Just yesterday, I checked my mail mailbox inside I found a letter from your Head office. I stated please find enclosed your

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inside and ask me to acknowledge receipt. The envelope was in a tattered state. More importantly, the

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was missing. I am concerned that someone has gone through my mail and possibly stolen the

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. I request you to please cancel my

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immediately. My account number is 332233 registered

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your Toronto branch. Kindly arrange to issue me a new

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, as I am travelling overseas

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week on a business trip. I need to carry my

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with me. Thanks in advance for your support. Yours faithfully, Mr Khushnood Ali.

ALIFri Jan 15 2021

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

157 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

acknowledge receipt
compromised security
unauthorized transactions
identity theft
reissue
secure (the account)
fraudulent activity
account holder
security measures
customer service
follow-up
discrepancy
escalate the issue
trace the delivery
account security
financial risk
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