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In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

#places #homes #space #countryside #people
It is true that new
homes
 are needed, but the only space available
is
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 the rural areas. As I agree with some
people
, it is important to not destroy the countryside by building
homes
, as will now be discussed. Many
people
 in many countries require new
homes
 , as most of them are coming down, due to it being old, but it can be built only in the countryside, as there is no
much
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such
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 place in the urban part of the country. The countryside has lots of space, but building
homes
 would takeaway the greenery and disturb many animals from living. As we have already cut many trees and destroyed many
forest
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 like
borivali
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Borivali
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 national park in
mumbai
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Mumbai
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. It would
also
 mean cutting down many mountains, which would indirectly damage the planet. In my opinion, there should be laws on controlling the population, as due to
it
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 rising there is
n
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eed for
homes
. As you can now read everything online, library spaces can be used to build new
homes
. Having taller buildings will help to accumulate more
people
 to stay.
People
 living in a joint family should be recommended, as they are taking lesser space. To sum up, rural areas should be protected because the world is being destroyed by all types of pollution. We cannot go back to the past to help mother nature, but we can prevent
from
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it being destroyed in the present and in the future. As in the future,
people
 won't be able to breathe because of cutting down of trees , as we get most of our oxygen from plants.So it important to preserve, what we currently have.
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