how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given table shows the percentage of unemployed
men
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and
women
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spent their
time
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last
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year in the UK. Overall, it is clear that
although
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most of the
men
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and
women
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used their
time
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for
housework
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, shopping and job hunting, more
women
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in the morning were involved in
housework
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. If
men
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take into account, 19% of them spent their
time
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for
housework
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in the morning while 22% of them utilized their
time
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for job hunting and it was the most
time
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spent by
men
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in any category. At least 1% of
men
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were indulged in drinking and 8 per cent of them were found in the bed in the morning
time
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.
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, almost half of the
time
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(49%)
women
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spent in the morning for
housework
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. None of the
women
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used their
time
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in taking rest and playing sports in the afternoon. Between zero to ten per cent of the
time
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spent by
men
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and
women
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both were in visiting friends and relatives, reading, decorating, walking, visiting the town, and sitting around.
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