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In today’s job market it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applicants may not need any formal qualifications. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, the increasing competitiveness in the professional field demands perfection in
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education
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 as well as the experience. While many opine that the recruiters nowadays look for the practical abilities of the candidate rather than their
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 and
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 will
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deminish
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diminish
 the need of professional degrees in the future, I totally disagree with
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 opinion. In
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 is as
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imperative
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 as practical skills.
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education
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 to say, a person can perform their task successfully only if they have some prior knowledge about the process.
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, having a formal qualification in a respective
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 facilitates the possibility of performing the work in
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 expected manner.
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, the performance of a manager will be average if they only work on basis of the practical knowledge they have gained,
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, a considerable rise in the productivity can be observed if they
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 possess a managerial degree along with experience.
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, the existence of professional
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 helps in defining the
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 role in a precise manner.
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, the educational qualification required to
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 a
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 can provide a clear idea to the human resource department to recruit the right talent for the role.
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,
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 vacancies in the field of
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information
 technology can never be fulfilled by any random candidate as the role demands specific knowledge in that particular stream and, only those candidates who
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 a degree in information technology can be suitable for the
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.  To summarize, owning a professional qualification in a corporate
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 is essential as it compliments the practical skills by not only ensuring the completion of the work in a correct and efficient manner but by guiding the HR in allocating the task to the right employs.
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