Education is not the only criterion for getting a job now as we find in many countries people remain jobless even after completing their studies. What are the reasons behind youth unemployment and what problems arise due to it? What solutions do you think this can have?

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unemployment rate is quite high in many countries even though there are enough qualified graduates. There are various attributes that
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of enough
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. The drawbacks that arise
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of joblessness and the multiple ways to tackle
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problem will be discussed below. The
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and foremost reason for the graduates to remain jobless is due to the fact that many
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confidence and the required inter-personal
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which are the basic needs to acquire any corporate job.
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they might have graduated from a renown university with excellent grades, lacking in communication
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attitude makes them ineligible to get the
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work. Another point to consider is they are just unwilling to take that extra effort needed to equip themselves for the highly-demanding technical assignments. Technical training courses,
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, could help alleviate the gap in
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subjects. One issue that arises due to
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joblessness is students who have taken education loan will not be able to clear the debt, unless they get are offered a good package.
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on the long-run reduces their self-confidence and
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the quality of their life might be affected.
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problem is the majority of a country's youth sitting jobless will directly affect the economical growth as younger generation attribute to almost 50% of the total population. There are two feasible solutions to eradicate unemployment. The
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possible solution is the state should create temporary or short-term
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for the freshly graduated students which would train them with the necessary
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required. Corporates,
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, should offer internship for the
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candidates with extraordinary techno-functional
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would benefit both the person who joined the job and
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the company which hired them. The
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way to solve
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is to train the students with soft
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whilst they are still in college.
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, while they graduate they will have all the qualities that are needed for IT
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. In conclusion,
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of
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attitude and shortage of technology knowledge may add to the joblessness, and
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could be overcome by providing the youth with the required training and offering
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for the eligible graduates.
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