Many countries plan to ban the sale of petrol and diesel cars in the future, with governments planning to support the use of electric vehicles. Do the advantages of electric vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
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deterioration
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are improving the Use synonyms
healty
environment.
In conclusion,it is hard to manage battery charging Correct your spelling
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health
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facility
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