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You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing the work. Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you have been working.

#work #community #manager #organisation
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in response to your recent advertisement for unpaid
work
 at your hospital. I am currently studying towards my accountancy qualifications and I would appreciate
if
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it if
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 I am given an opportunity to
work
 within the Finance department of your hospital.
This
 opportunity will not only enable me to contribute my time to support the
work
 of your hospital but
also
to
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gain relevant practical experience within Finance which will be helpful as my career progresses. As I
also
 live within the community, I have benefited from receiving healthcare from your hospital and I like the
work
ethics
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 at the hospital. I am available to
work
 for an initial period of 3 months and I can start
work
 within a notice period of 3 days. I have appended a copy of my resume to
this
 letter for your kind consideration. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Michael Akinyemi
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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