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Percentage of national consumer expenditure by category -2002

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The table demonstrates that the
percentage
 of national costumer spending on three different sections in Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweeden and Turkey in 2002. Overall, the popular category of consumer expenditure was food, drinks and
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tobacco
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ost money in five different countries, which was followed by clothing and footwear. At
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every
contury
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country
century
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east expenditure on education and leisure in 2002.
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, the
percentage
 of food, drink and tobacco
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 higher than the other two stages in each country, especially Turkey spent the most at 32,14%.
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Ireland was
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econd place of highest rank which is 28,91%.
On the other hand
, the lowest
expence
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expense
 was on education and leisure which was less than 5 % in every country. For
this
 stage, the significant
percentage
 of outlay
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 in Turkey at 4.35%. The
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third
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 category was clothes and footwear on
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owest
percentage
 of expenditure was 5.40% in Sweeden and
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ighest cost was 9% in Italy.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Consumer expenditure
  • Economic health
  • Housing
  • Nutrition
  • Healthcare
  • Education
  • Leisure
  • Transportation
  • Spending patterns
  • Disposable income
  • Demographics
  • Budget allocation
  • Financial literacy
  • Subsidies
  • Tax rates
  • Recession
  • E-commerce
  • Sustainability
  • Budgeting
  • Cost of living
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