Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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These days, there is an enormous
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called climate change with which we can not deal with.Do we actually need to find a way how to live with it
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of preventing
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global issue? From my point of view, we need to tackle
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and reduce our atrocious impact on the climate of
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and foremost, people should be educated
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. By raising people’s awareness we can find some ways how to handle with it.
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, if people had a basic knowledge it would not lead to deforestation, massive consumption of fossil fuels and a big amount of waste in the ocean that results in the rapid growth in global warming. To reduce a substantial amount of carbon dioxide emissions were can use public transport,
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icycle
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of personal vehicles.
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, we can use renewable sources of energy because
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will help to cut down on carbon dioxide emissions so that it will prevent the greenhouse effect.
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, it will be tough for people to adjust to the new atmosphere and living with
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might lead to some serious consequences.If
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not take necessary actions at the earliest, the
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generation will not have a place to live in.To illustrate, children will suffer from diseases due to
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lack of immunity.
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, if we want our children to live in
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afe and sound environment we must prevent
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climate change because it has already negatively affected our world. In conclusion, I guess that we need to prevent
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disaster in order to have a better future because by not doing so we will be in danger.
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, we need to do something to tackle
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global issue.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • climate change
  • prevent
  • adaptation
  • mitigation
  • cope with
  • effects
  • shift
  • mindset
  • lifestyle
  • balance
  • invest
  • research
  • technology
  • crucial
  • education
  • awareness
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