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Not enough students around the world choose to study science subjects at university.What are the reasons for this?what impact does this have on society?

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undergraduate who select
science
 subjects as their major all around the globe are not enough. The main cause of
this
 is because they get bored by curriculum and the effect of
this
 will be lack of new technologies. School and University going
people
 do not want to study
science
 course because they get easily get bored by studying these courses.
This
 is say that they are mostly based on the theories rather than practical and young
people
 are more interested in practical work rather than just learning theory.
As a result
, societies in many parts of the planet are facing problems,
such
 as lack of home based automation and most of the state in the world
import
 the technology from different state. Example: India
import
 90 per cent of the new technology, that its
people
 use, from the United States or China. The major impact of not having enough undergraduate of
science
 will be catastrophic.
This
 is because nations that
import
 more than
third
 of automation from different state will not be able to survive economically in future because you have to have
science
 education to survive in
this
 ever competitve world where technology is developing rapidly and without
science
 background
people
 cannot innovate or invent machinery.
For instance
, 95 per cent of developing region do not invent their product rather they
import
 from developed region. In conclusion,
although
 many pupil are not interested in
science
 studies, but for the development of the country it is necessary to have enough graduate of
science
 so they can compete in
this
 fast changing planet.
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