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With a fast pace of modern life more and more people are turning towards fast food for their main meals. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

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A dramatic increase in the number of
people
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 relying on fast
food
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 as their main meals of the day. In my opinion, it has positive and negative effects of consuming fast
food
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, and I will explain these points in the forthcoming paragraphs, before drawing a reasoned conclusion. There are several advantages
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people
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 consuming fast
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 as the main meal nowadays.
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, fast
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 saves time and easy to cook as many
people
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 have busy schedule no time to home-cook
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.
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, working parents can cook
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foodfood
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food food
good food
 in a minute and they do not need any cooking skills.
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, most of the
people
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 prefer to eat fast
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 while doing their stuff, like
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driving, watching TV and others.
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, it is apparent why
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 are favouring fast
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 rather than home-cooked
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.
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, replacing proper meals to fast
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 may lead to many health problems. Because
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food
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 contains
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igher level of sugar and no nutritional values, which can cause cancer, diabetes, obesity and many more. If
people
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 neglect to have the right combination of these nutrients, it will be very difficult to live a healthy lifestyle. In
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 case, most fast foods
contains
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food
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 additive and preservatives. In conclusion,
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 many
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 are depending on fast
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 because of their hectic lifestyle.
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, if
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 taking an
xcessive
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excessive
 amount of fast-
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food food
 may lead to many health problems.
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