One of the most conspicuous trends in the 21st century is the difficulty of keeping a life-work balance. Some people find it hard to manage their time to be successful and fully responsible at their workplace and at the same time spend quality time with their families. This is certainly a problem faced by many.

There is no doubt that in the highly competitive business environment, it is extremely difficult not to be competitive at
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successful and
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forces them to spend more than eight hours per day at
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and duties but
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does additional
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. To manage that it is possible to limit employee’s
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or share them with others. The
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point that needs to be taken into consideration is that
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should manage their
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at home like washing, cleaning, ironing and
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, communicate with other family members. To be able to do so, they must manage to not be overtired from their
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at
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case, they will be able to spend quality
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with their families and maintain their
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. The competition at a workplace
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increased population and our demand to do best in every sector is the main reason we are not being able to balance in our professional and personal life. The decreased family bonding and less
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for socialising are two main reasons for
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heinous trend. To tackle
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we need to spend more
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with our family members and contribute to household works. More
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should be reserved for the dear and near one than spending those times in electronic devices. The value of family bonding should be taught from
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early childhood and the parents should make examples through their works to teach children the importance of family value. To sum up, there are a lot of
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who cannot successfully manage their
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and keep
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ork-home balance. I highly recommend
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to limit their
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or share them among other
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or organisations as well as plan a timetable of
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spend at
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and at home.

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