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A current trend in the UK is to encourage school leavers and new graduates to become enterpreneurs and run their own business. In fact, an academy has been established to teach young people how to become enterpreneurs. What factors have contributed to this trend? Discuss, giving examples.

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Nowadays, many young
people
 want to be an entrepreneur and to create their own
business
, while there are others who think that it is better to have a profession. In my opinion, I believe, that factors have contributed to
this
 trend are appropriate. On the one hand, running their own
business
 is more effective,
also
, worthy than being someone’s employer and develop
others
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business
. Having
c
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a
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hance being an employee, obviously, lessen
stressful
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. There are
c
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the
a
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apability of avoidance some stressful situations,
also
, no worry about some specific work problems,
for instance
, problems with coworkers, being criticized by
b
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the
a
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oss, low salary. In my
view point
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, your own
business
 is your own ideas and
creature
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creations
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.
On the other hand
, having
p
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a
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rofession helps keep
in
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b
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the
a
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alance between your work and life. If
people
 start their own case, they will spend more part of their time for work.
Furthermore
, there will be doubts and unquestionably,
this
 is not easy to stabilize in
b
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usiness world,
also
, the opportunities of thriving
business
 are few and far between.
Finally
, in my opinion, not all
people
, young
people
 can deal with running
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a
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business
 and being a businessman, so,
people
, who can risk and can overcome all obstacles, should be the entrepreneurs. Being the entrepreneurs
are not trend
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,
this
 occurs by
c
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haracter of human. In conclusion, even if factors have contributed to
this
 trend are appropriate, there are not
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statement
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stating
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 that all should do trendy things.
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