The best way to travel is travel in a group led by a tour guide. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? You should write 180-220 words.

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For me, travelling is
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new experience,
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ew challenge. It is very interesting to see new places,
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towns and countries. The majority of people prefer to travel alone. But others including me think that
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it would be better to be led by a
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guide
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with a
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guide
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is worthwhile because of a variety of advantages. The
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and main reason is getting complete knowledge about the place you will visit, so the trip becomes even more informative. The
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can tell and show all the features of the site, its history, culture, customs. Even in a country, each part has its
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culture and if while
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we do not respect them we will face
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lots of problems. Another thing is in order to not to waste time,
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uide can show the important places that have to be visited.
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you will save time in finding good ways, hotels, restaurants and etc.
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,
traveling
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in a group led by a
tour
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guide
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make our trip more enjoyable and safer than
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alone. It has lots of interesting group activities and we will never feel lonely. In conclusion,
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with a
guide
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give us
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safety
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, useful and exciting excursion,
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save our time. I would always prefer travelling with a group of people which will be led by professional
tour
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planners and guides.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • safety
  • organization
  • knowledgeable
  • itinerary
  • local customs
  • language barrier
  • freedom
  • flexibility
  • random
  • spontaneous
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