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The best way to travel is travel in a group led by a tour guide. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? You should write 180-220 words.

#travel #group #tour #guide
Many
people
 say
the
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travelling with your expedition
guide
 and with many
people
 around you are the best
way
 to
travel
. In my opinion,
group
 travelling is more interesting, and I agree with
this
 statement. Travelling is
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reat
way
 to avoid your mantel problems and helps to relax from busy workdays.
People
 choose
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ravel in their holidays and spend time with other
people
 or go with their family. It makes you feel better and become healthier. Travelling with the
group
 by your leader
guide
 will the best travelling.
Firstly
,
travelers
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 prefer to be in groups and teams because they may talk and find new friends. One of
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dvantages of the
group
 travelling with
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uide is
people
 will not feel boring
in
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 a long
trip
. They can play with other
people
, look exciting places and say his emotions that took from the
travel
.
Secondly
, if you get injuries at
travel
 in nature, your friends or partners can help you in
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ituation with
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mergency. They can call the rescue and avoid the consequences.
Thirdly
,
group
 travelling with
group
 saves your money at
travel
 discounts,
such
 as the discount for
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airplane
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 ticket, the hotel, and the admission ticket. There are many benefits to
travel
 in
group
travel
 by your leading guides
such
 as the
tour
guide
 will arrange all the details about the
trip
 in advance. You can
also
 don’t worry about
the
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losing your
way
 to
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otel and the direction, where rent cars to transport during the
travel
. It doesn’t need any responsibilities and it makes your
trip
 easier. Another advantage is that led by a
tour
guide
 will save much time than
traveling
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 alone. With the professional knowledge,
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our
guide
 will make the smartest schedule and learn interesting facts about places. I would never forget my
trip
 with
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uide in Nur-Sultan city. During the
travel
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our
guide
 said many interesting stories and facts and show us many places
of
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 the city. It was the best
travel
 that I've ever see. In conclusion, there are many advantages when
people
travel
 in a
group
 led by a
tour
guide
,
such
 as save money, save time, do not feel boring, and is easy to take care of.
Therefore
, I strongly agree that the best
way
 to
travel
 is in a
group
 led by a
tour
guide
.
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • safety
  • organization
  • knowledgeable
  • itinerary
  • local customs
  • language barrier
  • freedom
  • flexibility
  • random
  • spontaneous
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