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A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans. On the other hand, other argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various need, including uses for food and research. What is your opinion?

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Nowadays, an enormous amount of people believe that
animals
 should not be used for their own advantage as their right are no different from
humans
. Inversely, some people state that
animals
 should be used for
food
 and new inventions. In my opinion,
although
, we agree to some extent that they have the same rights as
humans
 there are more benefits to
humans
,
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 if they are used for
food
 and
research
. To start with,
animals
 are an essential part of
food
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the food
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 chain, they help to meet the demand for
food
that is
 consumed by
humans
. As they are rich in proteins, they are
also
 recommended by the doctors.
For Example
, chicken is highly rich in protein and by consuming daily
also
 helps your body to meet the minimum requirement of proteins, which was ideally not possible by consuming vegetarian
food
.
Besides
this
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 there are other by-products that are essential for
humans
such
 as milk.
animals
 are used for domestication like milf and
diary
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dairy
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 products, cheeses,
Animals
 are used in labs for performing
research
 on new drugs that are going to be brought into the market. Almost, all the vaccines that are available in the market have been tested
first
 on the
animals
.
Consequently
, by performing
this
 testing has resulted in much successful
research
. In conclusion,
Although
,
animals
 have equal rights to
humans
, human evolution will have not lasted longer if the
animals
 were not used for
research
 and consumption.
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