Directors of large organizations earn much higher salaries than ordinary employees do. Some people think it is necessary, but others are of the opinion that it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

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now, it has become a topic of debate as a section of the society believes that paying excessively to
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most staff of an organization is completely acceptable, whereas others hold a view that
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is not fair to the junior workers. In my opinion, I completely agree that
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huge compensation to executives should be regarded positively. On the one hand, many have valid arguments against higher
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and foremost, everyone in a firm works around 9 hours a day,
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the reason everyone should be paid
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.
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is because as per the IT markets' standard,
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on each level have to clock
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45 hours per week regardless of their positions and Infosys is the prime example of
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, without any effort of
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on lower positions, seniors can not drive a company because most of the technical work is done by the juniors and
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just deliver that to clients.
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,
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with less
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have
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invested a prodigious amount of money and
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to acquire the required
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and educational degree;
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, attractive
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to seniors is not a fair process followed by companies.
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, people who advocate the view that
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higher
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to directors and VPs have certain reasons behind their thinking.
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, running a firm smoothly requires a team of workers with extensive
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and knowledge about different industries to deal with numerous international clients and to crack any deal in no
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. These senior-most people have been working in different sectors since ages so their
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and work commitments should be compensated with handsome
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, if a director fails at any point of
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means the entire organization would suffer. Mahindra Satyam,
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, has a similar story where CFO failed to run the company
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, lower staff had to suffer as they were terminated.
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, I wholeheartedly agree that attractive remuneration to directors is completely fair and the right approach. To conclude,
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many still argue that paying excessive
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to the top-most worker is unfair to juniors, I am completely convinced that
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is definitely a fair option as these people are behind running the business properly and due to
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the workers on lower positions are earning.
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