Some people think it is a good thing for senior managers to have much higher salaries than the other workers in a company. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today's world, it is believed by some part of the population that senior
managers
should receive much higher salaries in comparison to other employees in the firm. I do not agree with this
statement and this
essay will discuss some evidences
which, in turn, will support my opinion.
Change the wording
evidence
pieces of evidence
shreds of evidence
To begin
with, on the one hand, such
an approach could easily demotivate the majority of workers withing
the company and they might become aggressive and Correct your spelling
within
loose moral
. Correct your spelling
lose morale
This
is because of the fact that if there is a large gap between the wages
of manager
and other staff the latter are likely to feel Correct article usage
the manager
unvaluable
and unnecessary. Correct your spelling
invaluable
Therefore
not only will they become less productive and have worse performance that, in turn, might decrease company's
profits but, Correct article usage
the company's
firthermore
, a Correct your spelling
furthermore
lrage
number of employees might find Correct your spelling
larger
this
insufficient and leave their work place
. Correct your spelling
workplace
For instance
, recent research has shown that when the salary of senior managers
was increased subordinates' performance has
deteriorated by 10%.
Unnecessary verb
apply
Moreover
, if a business has a tall organisational structure and it
has a lot of Correct pronoun usage
apply
managers
such
a raise in wages
can significantly increased
Wrong verb form
increase
firm's
costs. Correct article usage
the firm's
This
is due to
the fact that wages
for employees are included into
fixed costs and are Change preposition
in
subtracting
from revenue when calculating profits. Wrong verb form
subtracted
As a result
, not only might the company have much
lower net profit but Correct article usage
a much
also
it could have a net loss. For example
, economic analysts suggest that with such
an approach an enterprise might loose
10 or even 20% of its income.
Eventually, Correct your spelling
lose
to conclude
, I disagree with the fact that senior managers
' wages
should be considerably higher that
ordinary workers Correct word choice
than
have
since it has a lot of drawbacks. Unnecessary verb
apply
Firstly
, it is likely to demotivate staff and damage their performance and, secondly
, it might significantly increase costs for an enerprise
and decrease their final profit.Correct your spelling
enterprise
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