Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information. such as their hobbies and interest, and whether they are married or single. some people say that this information may be relevant or useful other disagree. discuss these views and give your own opinion.

In today's world, usually, when people are applying for jobs they are required to write their personal information

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as their hobbies, interest and family status. It is believed by some part of the population that

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method has benefits while others consider that it is useless.

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with, on the one hand, when employers have enough data about their

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applicants

they can much deeply understand whether

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person

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suits the needs of the company or not.

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is because of the fact that not only they might find out what contribution can a certain worker bring for the firm but

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they can analyse his character and understand whether it will be a good co-operator in

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.

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, without fast decisions directors and managers of an enterprise can significantly simplify their work by asking those who

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for a job to write some additional personal information.

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, recent research has shown that when there is some private data about a

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70% of choices made by directors are successful.

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,

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approach could be irrelevant and usefulness since employers might focus more on worker's interests and hobbies rather than

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his professional skills. The main reason for

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might be the fact that managers might make a fast decision about a

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just looking on its personal data but ignoring his work experience and other important for job stuff.

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, not only is it more important to look at a professional performance of a

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and his abilities but

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in some businesses it might not be important to know

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's hobbies if he is a valuable and a productive employee.

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, economic analysts suggest that, usually, large, successful firms do not ask for private details about the applicant since they concentrate on their working skills. Eventually, to conclude,

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,

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approach might be useful in order to know more about the applicant and make a right choice but, despite

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fact, in some

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it might be irrelevant since the company focuses of

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details about workers. In my opinion, it is better to make compulsory for people to write about their life not related to

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since it is likely to open the horizons for

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the employer

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and to give him an opportunity to understand an employee more deeply.