A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. HelShe has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

Dear Ali ,
Hopefully
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you are doing well, I heard from someone that you are planning to go
summer
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on summer
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holidays in northern areas in
coming
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the coming
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week. but you are confused about it. I want to tell you that you just have to go and enjoy that time. Because I remember in the
last
year I
also
go with my family for summer vacations and I enjoyed
a
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it a
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lot. Because there are very good natural views to be seen. It's my suggestion to make a plan and must have to go. I will bet you when you reached there, you will be
shooked
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to see the beauty of nature and the mountains. And when you stay there in the camp, you will definitely
enjoyed
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the weather.
furthermore
, before you will go, you must have to check the weather condition because
in
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apply
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the area having cold weather and you must have to take your warm clothes and jackets. ,
Otherwise
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you will be sick. I will promise you the
next
time I will go with you and we will enjoy
a
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ourselves a
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lot. Have a safe journey Nabeel Khan
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Budget-friendly
  • Unplugged retreat
  • Campsite
  • Tent pitching
  • Outdoor cooking
  • De-stress
  • Itinerary
  • Back-to-nature
  • Bonding experience
  • Hiking trails
  • Weather forecast
  • Amenities
  • Wildlife safety
  • Essential gear
  • Adventure
  • Disconnect
  • Tranquility
  • Navigational skills
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