You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take

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Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Akshay Shrivastava. I am writing

this

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letter to inform you about my missing

card

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which I was supposed to get from your bank.

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, the envelope which I got from the courier company does not contain any

card

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and it was empty.

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is a very serious concern and I request you to please look into it as soon as possible.

This

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particular

card

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is linked to my salary account. I am assuming that someone has gone through my mailbox and possibly stolen it. I would request you to block the

card

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. And please let me know what formalities I have to follow to get the new

card

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. It would be a great help if the bank can send an executive to my place for

further

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assistance. And do I

also

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have to submit a police FIR of my lost

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? Looking forward to hearing from your end at the earliest Regards Akshay Shrivastava

akshayshrivastava1992Thu Feb 11 2021

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

160 words

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