You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take

#hotel #city #weather #time #year #system #manager #action

Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Akshay Shrivastava. I am writing

this

letter to inform you about my missing

card

which I was supposed to get from your bank.

Moreover

, the envelope which I got from the courier company does not contain any

card

and it was empty.

This

is a very serious concern and I request you to please look into it as soon as possible.

This

particular

card

is linked to my salary account. I am assuming that someone has gone through my mailbox and possibly stolen it. I would request you to block the

card

. And please let me know what formalities I have to follow to get the new

card

. It would be a great help if the bank can send an executive to my place for

further

assistance. And do I

also

have to submit a police FIR of my lost

card

? Looking forward to hearing from your end at the earliest Regards Akshay Shrivastava

Submitted by akshayshrivastava1992 on Thu Feb 11 2021

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1Word repetition
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8 paragraphs

160 words

8.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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