In many workplaces, online communication is getting more common than meeting face to face. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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Several offices are adopting web communication than physical
meetings
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the drawbacks.
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demonstrate that the company workers will save the commute
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analysis of how the main disadvantage, namely ineffective
meetings
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is
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not valid.
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with, the primary reason to have
a computer
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meetings
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is to save
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time
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of
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the participants.
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is to say that in order to attend the
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, many individuals have to travel from their office to another office and it consumes a lot of valuable
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with the heavy traffic on road .
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, if a video conference is organised for work discussions,
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the commute
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is saved, which can be used to complete other important tasks. Distant
meetings
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also
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helps
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to save the staff from getting
infectious
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disease. To exemplify, online platforms allowed the
continous
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operation of
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of businesses in the mids of the pandemic.
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helped the staff to work from home and attend
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meeting as there was no chance of transmitting the deadly disease.
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, those opposed to
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say that
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web communications are not effective as they cannot express themself completely by presenting the important plans on the big boards to explain the employees.
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, there are online platforms
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as Zoom and Microsoft Teams that allows
to have
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meetings
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as
effectiven
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effective
as face to face by the features like being able to have a
two way
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video conference and share the screen of the presenter to the participants.
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advancement in technology has
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changes
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the perception of online business
meetings
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forever. In conclusion, the fact that the online communication
lead
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to
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time saving
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and protect the workers from the spread of the
contengious
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contagious
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disease and it is possible to have an effective meeting clearly outweighs the flawed argument that the
meetings
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are not fruitful.
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