In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Recently, there has been widespread controversy about the decision on improving
transportation
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the transportation
system
in many countries. One claimed that is
better to use huge
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a huge
the huge
amount
of fund on building railway
stations between cities. However
, some think that the maintenance of current public transports
is important. These are two constrating
viewpoints and Correct your spelling
contrasting
this
essay will discuss both viewpoints while final opinion will be drawn.
To start with, supporters of the view that more railway
stations should be constructed thought that this
will aids
in reducing emissions of pollutants to the air. Change the verb form
aid
This
implies that there will be improvement
in Add an article
an improvement
the improvement
health
quality of the citizens. Add an article
the health
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a significant
railway
transport system
in the country
. In addition
to this
, transports
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the transports
such
as farm products from one country
to another will be convenient. Likewise
, products that are produced locally will be distributed widely within the country
easily. Infact
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In fact
this
can boost the economy
status of the Replace the word
economic
country
with these market strategies. For example
, Dangote Enterprise in Nigeria use
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uses
railway
stations in transferring cement products. Hence
, it is clearly seen that huge amount
of money
should be diverted for the building of train lines.
Conversely
, opponents of this
view alluded that available public transports
system
should be ameliorate
by budgeting with Change the verb form
be ameliorated
huge
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a huge
the huge
amount
of money
because it will help to reduce congestion on highways. In other word
, transportation on road will be easier and conducive due to less traffic jam. To site and example, Recent construction of overhead Bridges on highways in Nigeria control traffic problem and make Change the wording
another word
other words
traveling
convenient. Change the spelling
travelling
Furthermore
, if more expenses is
allocated for already public Change the verb form
are
transports
such
as widening
of roads, distribution of new buses to drivers will assist in decreasing the occurrence of road accidents. Add an article
the widening
This
means that safety
of the citizens will be secured. Add an article
the safety
Consequently
, budgeting huge
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a huge
amount
of money
to available transports
system
in the co6 will be beneficial to the citizens at large.
In conclusion, this
essay discussed two constrating
points about Correct your spelling
contrasting
importance
of diverting Add an article
the importance
money
to building
of Add an article
the building
railway
or maintaining the current transports
system
. In my opinion, I believe that connecting cities by building new
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a new
railway
station will be preferable because the environment will be safe from air pollution and transportation of good will be easier.Submitted by Ayoqueen on
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