Some people think they have right to use as much fresh water as they want, while others believe that governments should strictly control the use of fresh water as it is limited resource. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that whether the
water
used by humans should be limited or not. People do have
right
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to have access to
water
since
water
is necessary for their life.
However
,
water
is
such
a precious resource that we should avoid wasting
water
. In my opinion, it is our responsibility to use
water
reasonably. People claim that no limitation should be put on
water
consumption for a few reasons.
To begin
with,
water
is
basic
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a basic
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need for survival which should be granted for all human beings.
Besides
, the majority of the surface of the Earth is covered by
water
. Once we develop the technology used for purifying it, the source of
water
will be enlarged. What is more,
water
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cycle is happening all the time and wasted
water
just go back to nature before it reaches underground in the form of rain.
On the contrary
, other people hold the view that the authorities should limit the amount of
water
being used before we run out of it.
Firstly
, most of
water
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in
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our planet is salty
water
in the ocean. Scientists have not
find
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an efficient and inexpensive method to purify it. Only a small part of
water
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is fresh and mainly stored as glacier which we
also
can not
utilze
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utilize
. If we do not preserve
water
resources, it will be harsh for our offspring to make a living.
Secondly
,
water
is distributed unequally. Unless governments restrict
water
use in
certain
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area and build infrastructures to transport
water
to dry areas, domestic life, agricultural and industrial developments in dry areas will not be continued. In conclusion,
water
is essential for life,
consequenly
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consequently
, individuals
as well as
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, as well as goverments,
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goverments
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governments
government
should use it properly.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • freshwater
  • personal freedom
  • resources
  • daily necessities
  • environmental sustainability
  • depletion
  • regulation
  • distribution
  • underprivileged
  • future generations
  • conservative use
  • sustainable practices
  • monitoring
  • regulating
  • judiciously
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