Some people believe that government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Other things that building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both of views and Give your opinion.

In
the
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recent years, the growth of
traffic
congestion
have
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major
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problem for many countries. While some people hope to believe that
government
should be spent more fun to build new
trains
and underground lines, Other masses advocate that making more vertical and horizontal
roads
is
better
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way to reduce
traffic
.
This
essay will not only discuss both of you but my opinion will
also
be highlighted while concluding
this
. Focusing on the formal view, those who believe that spending the money on built
trains
and their lines have numerous reasons to support their perception. The
first
assumption is that authorities who allocate
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amount of money to improve the railway infrastructure.
This
is because
speed
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of the
trains
will increase as well as
train
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will reach on time.
As a result
, if more people will use the railway for transportation, it can be reduced the uses of
car
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the car
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on the road, So that
traffic
will
also
be decreased.
Moreover
,
this
mode of transport is cheaper compared to other transport and available on time. Due to
this
,
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people have used Metro to commute
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office and other places.
Consequently
,
this
will reduce crowd on street. In the sharp contrast to
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group, There is
sizable
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population which opine that building more and wider
roads
to solve
this
issue.
This
is due to
government
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have made
more
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wider
roads
;
However
, the number of cars is not reduced because of
increasing
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population.
Furthermore
,
lack
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of availability of land to build new
roads
. Owing to
this
Government
could not build
roads
in order to mitigate
traffic-related
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problem.
For example
, according to
survey
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the survey
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, there were
not
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land available for making
roads
in many megacities in the USA. In conclusion, it seems to me that
government
have to construct more
trains
and subway lines to overcome
traffic
congestion compared to spend money on making
roads
.
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