Some people say that History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History Discuss both these views and give your opinion

A lot of millennial are of the notion that
history
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and it should be taught to the students in the school while other says
science
and
technology
are of the utmost importance. I believe
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history
teaches us about our past and our ancestors
however
science
and
technology
prepare us for our future by improving our living conditions. On one hand, it is important to give lessons about
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history
to know more about our forefathers. How we have evolved from apes to humans over the million years? All these teachings play a vital role to teach our generation the value of human life.
Moreover
,
history
keeps us connected to our predecessors and we can learn from their life experiences.
Besides
, its
also
important to learn about our culture and heritage in order to preserve that for our posterity.
On the other hand
,
science
and
technology
cannot be neglected. Due to advancement in
technology
man has invented various machines which
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made life easier as compared to
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early age. With
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in
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there are many health issues that are being faced by the human society and to cure that it has become necessary to do research in medical line, so it is important to teach the children the basics of
science
and
technology
. In conclusion, lessons for both
history
and
science
and
technology
should be given in school as none of them can be neglected. The former is related to our past while the latter holds
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importance in the coming future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • crucial
  • comprehend
  • retrospect
  • gain insights
  • reflect on
  • sharpen
  • evaluate
  • significance
  • heritage
  • legacy
  • advent
  • breakthroughs
  • sustain
  • sustainability
  • revolutions
  • empowered
  • overcome
  • transform
  • advancements
  • collaboration
  • cooperation
  • diversity
  • fulfilling
  • promote
  • facilitate
  • prosperity
  • enhance
  • foster
  • foundation
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