In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?

Unemployment has

rosen

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risen

Rosen

dramatically in the

last

few decades,

specially

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among

graduates

with

bachelors

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a bachelors

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degree or even those holding masters/doctorate degree. Two factors can be

atrributed

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attributed

to

this

.

First

,

enormous

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an enormous

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number of

graduates

from similar fields of study.

Secondly

, the economical crisis countries are suffering from. In my opinion, if schools keep

balance

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the balance

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of admissions relevant to the job market and

graduates

think of self-employment, the situation would be alleviated.

First

and foremost, a lot of students are graduating in highly common branches of study, leading to oversupply

graduates

with

same

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educational background, creating a very challenging competition and difficulty in finding a job.

For example

, In

India

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there are 10 times

graduates

of

Chemisty

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Chemistry

in

compariosn

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comparison

to those who finish Math.

However

, in order to keep the balance, Universities need to adjust

number

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a number

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of admissions to a particular branch.

In other words

, seats should be limited and be placed according to available

suppy

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supply

and demand in the workforce.

Secondly

, many countries are going through

financial

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the financial

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crisis, paralysing government in hiring

univeristy

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university

graduates

.

thus

leaving a lot of

graduates

without being employed.

For instance

, back in time,

Iraqi

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the Iraqi

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government was hiring almost 60

percent

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per cent

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of all

graduates

every year, but nowadays it is capable to hire only 5

percent

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per cent

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. In my opinion,

graduates

should be trying to have their startup

bussiness

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business

and be self-employed, in

this

way they

enusre

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ensure

their income and might provide job

oppertunites

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opportunities

opportunity

for other

graduates

as well. In

conlcusion

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conclusion

,

high

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a high

the high

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number of

graduates

from

same

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the same

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fields of study and economical challenges

countires

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countries

face nowadays has left many

graduates

unemployed.

However

,

maintaing

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maintaining

balance of seats in university and thinking of self-employment might be

solution

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the solution

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to the issue.