Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.

Some people harbour a belief that how

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choice

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should select to

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at the university

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they are forced to

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certain

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about science or

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, while others hold the reverse viewpoint. From my perspective, it is a controversial

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which deserves an in-depth discussion.

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with, one of the main argument in its favour is that university

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should be free to choose their prefered areas of

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. Society will benefit more

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if our

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ignite the passion

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learning which they are interesting

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, nobody can predict that which area of

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will be most useful to society in the future and

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it may be that employers value the creative thinking skills

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of technical skills; if

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were the case, we would need to learn the knowledge of art, history and philosophy than science and

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.

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, some people occasionally realize the fact that the universities should only provide the key subjects

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which will

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in the future. They may assert university

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as medicine, computer science, engineering and information of

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rather than some art degrees. It is true that these certain

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will offer more job opportunities, career progression, better salaries and

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improve the quality of life for

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.

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aforementioned, the governments can ensure to bridge the gap between

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and human society

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lead to

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of new

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and economic growth. In conclusion, despite the fact that universities focus only on certain subjects may bring the large for

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future;

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, I personally prefer

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system for

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who can select what they want to learn.