Air transport is increasingly used to export fruit and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
In the modern era, without exception, it is always a contentious topic, whether one nation should export fruits and veggies to other
counties
or not through air transportation in their offseason. Correct your spelling
countries
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essay, I will elaborate my viewpoint and discuss various pros and cons in regards to the same. To embark
with, every country is not capable of growing all plantations Verb problem
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its own farmland Change preposition
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due to
climatic variation or lack of water resources. Countries like Bangladesh and Nepal are fond of several eatables which only India
is growing. Subsequently
, developing countries like India
have been expanding their business and value in the market by delivering such
goods. In addition
to that, sending through aviation has gained a
popularity in recent days as perishable goods go bad quickly. Remove the article
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, it has increased the business of aviation companies. On the flip hand, many money-minded individuals have made it their cheap business. In order to make them available to affected areas, exporters have been supplying such
artefacts at higher rates. Apparently, few of the masses raise the supply of such
items to other nations and reduce the supply in their own country which has led to many repercussions. To exemplify, a few days back Indian rice shellers have
started selling their products to European nations, Unnecessary verb
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as a result
, rice prices hiked in India
being a producing country, which was more than others. After seeing this
fact, the government of India
has put some barriers on exports outside India
. To conclude
, after taking all aspects into account, ,
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advantages
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the advantages
overweigh
the disadvantages and exports should not be banned. Bureaucrats should scrutinize all the policies carefully before implementation. Verb problem
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, authorities must monitor all suppliers closely.Submitted by kusumja on
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