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Death penalty is still practiced in jurisdiction system of many countries. Some people believe that this type of punishment should be abolished. However, others are of opposite opinion. Discuss both sides of this debate and give your own opinion.

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Giving the
death
penalty
 is very rare in today's era. But some countries still believe in
this
punishment
. Some expert said that it is very unfair to give a
death
penalty
 but some are said its good to give a
punishment
 to prisoners who did an extreme level of
crime
 like murder , rape. God made all of us and our life and
death
 in his hand. But if somebody going against society and did a
crime
 than our justice system gives a
penalty
 to prisoners.
Firstly
, if
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victim
victom
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the victom
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 was murdered by any criminal than
victim's
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the victim's
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 family members want justice and most
of
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people
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the people
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wants
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dead
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a dead
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penalty
 for that criminal because their family member is no more so they wants tit for tat. In
that
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 cases , it seems like
a
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the
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 right way to give a
punishment
 and give a message to society.
On the other hand
,
death
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penalty
 is giving a wrong message to society ,even after
dead
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the dead
a dead
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penalty
,
a
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the
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crime
 rate is increasing day by day.
Government
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The government
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 should understand that
this
 type of
penalty
 is not helping to
reducing
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a
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the
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crime
 rate and that
have
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 to change their law which is against
a
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apply
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human
death
 . In my opinion,
death
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the death
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penalty
 is not a good way to giving
a
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apply
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punishment
 to
criminal
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a criminal
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 , they can send him a
life time
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lifetime
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 in jail so prisoners feel that what they did in past and accept guilty.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • capital punishment
  • jurisdiction
  • deterrent
  • morality
  • rehabilitation
  • wrongful convictions
  • innocence
  • retribution
  • ethical dilemmas
  • life sentence
  • judicial system
  • human rights
  • lethal injection
  • electric chair
  • justice
  • penal system
  • recidivism
  • appeal process
  • clemency
  • miscarriage of justice
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