Many countries spend a lot of money in the arts. Some people think investment in the arts Is necessary, but others say money is better spent on public services and facilities. Discuss Both views and give your own opinion.

There is a large amount of

money

that is

invested

into

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arts

by

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many countries. Some

people

strongly advocate that the

money

spent

in

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art

is necessary, while others dispute that the government funds should be invested

on

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public

services

and facilities. From my perspective,

government

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may consider the needs of the

city

before arriving at a funding

decision

.

Firstly

,

the

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funding for

art

is supported by

people

who believe that

art

might make urban life interesting and rewarding. Compared with a concrete jungle

city

, Artistic creations are able to reduce the boredom of living in a

city

. The public place will become more visually attractive due to the artwork.

For example

, Three-dimensional painting can draw ordinary streets into three-dimensional, like polar ice deep, so that pedestrians walking on the street have the feeling of walking on the ice. Especially for the youths, they might be more satisfied with it.

Also

,

people

can visit

art

galleries and attend

art

exhibitions to reduce the monotony of daily life.

Secondly

, other

people

consider it necessary to spend

money

on public

services

because it is indispensable to the daily lives of

public

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.

For example

, the funding can be invested in the construction of public hospitals, which can provide the public with

free

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physical examination. And

also

, they can receive treatment as soon as possible if they are diagnosed with some conditions. What’s more,

money

can be spent on food science and technology, which may offer

people

a wider range of food options and tackle famine by increasing food yields. Based on the major factors above, I believe that government

which

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invests

money

whether in the arts or public

services

both have a significant impact on society.

Nevertheless

, the

decision

which

are

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made by governments may

depends

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on the stage of development of a

city

. If the

decision

is wrong, it will hinder the development of the

city

. For cities with poor facilities, the investment in any form of

art

is not likely to maintain a basic standard of living.

Likewise

, for the cities which are relatively prosperous and well-developed, without artworks,

the

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city

life could be dull. To summarize, investment in

art

can make a

city

more attractive. The

money

which spends on

services

and facilities have

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a positive

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impact on the wellbeing of the general public.

However

, the

decision

making might take into account the needs of the

city

.